Wrote for school, kind of a poetry thing, what do you think?

YOU BETTER ******* GIVE THAT TO HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'VE DREAMED OF MY PERFECT MAN GIVING ME SOMETHING ALONG THOSE LINES!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DONT GIVE THAT TO HER YOU ARE A FOOL BECAUSE THAT IS THE MOST PRECIOUS PIECE OF LITERATURE SHE WILL EVER RECIEVE IN HER LIFE MOST LIKELY. and say you do get married one day? you will have the poem to share to your kids. teach them how to actually confess to a girl!! YOU NEED TO GIVE THAT TO HER NOW!!!!! OR ELSE!!!!