Can you give your opinions for this as an opening to my novel?

There's a lot of telling in the first paragraph or so. I didn't read it all because it's one huge block of text. Instead of telling us she was fat, how can you show us without actually saying the words? Maybe her clothes are too tight? Maybe she put her hands on the sides of her waste and grabbed and inch of protruding skin? Also, don't tell us how pretty she is. In fact, you do it twice in consecutive paragraphs.